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| MichaelTerndrup | here mine do you like it | 0 | Jan 2 2012, 2:18 PM EST by MichaelTerndrup | ||
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Thread started: Jan 2 2012, 2:18 PM EST
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Painful experience
By Agent Mike T Setting: Winchester Virginia Plot: The unsub(who is HIV positive) is killing Single Father Men who only have one child a girl by sleeping with them and then shooting them why they sleep , Also Hotch must stay be hide when he get a visit from a former team member Main Characters involved: The Whole team Begging Quote: Getting over a painful experience is much like crossing monkey bars. You have to let go at some point in order to move forward. -- Author Unknown- Hotch How the case is solved: Elle Greenaway( who over hear him and gracie talking to the team) tell Hotch it’s a woman who HIV positive and is most likely going to be dead soon so she want to get back at the people who allowed these to happen to her. JJ and Emily go to take the Unsub down and Rossi Morgan and Reid save the last three men she wanted to kill Whodunnit: Kate Mcknock she got HIV by her farther and she was sleeping and killing her friend’s father who knew about it and did nothing Other: Elle Greenaway came back to the BAU to tell Hotch that she was sorry with what happen between them and that her husband told her to forgive because he a man of God and she want to be one too. End Quote: Forgiveness and letting go are steps on our road back to happiness. Tina Dayton quotes - Elle Greenaway |
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| Agent-Jay | The Chainsaw Man by Agent-Jay | 2 | Dec 24 2011, 1:56 AM EST by Agent-Jay | ||
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Thread started: Dec 23 2011, 1:49 PM EST
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Setting : Houses that are located further from the neighborhood.
Plot : The weapon used by the unsub is a chainsaw(usually cuts his victims into pieces, starting with the legs, and moving up to the other parts of the body). The unsub kills his victims and takes one family photo as his trophy. During the unsub's last kill, he left a witness behind : a 9 year-old girl(Kim). He was imprisoned for 12 years before he was given a death penalty. The killings started again, now done by a copycat who was obsessed with the unsub's 'good work' and every clue left behind seem to lead to the sole-survivor(Kim). She realizes that she is now the target and she seeks for the help of the BAU team. Main Characters Involved : The whole BAU team is involved, but it is mostly Morgan, Prentiss, Hotch, Reid and Garcia. Garcia will be the one who is impacted and she finally reveals more about her personnel and family life. Reid finds the key piece of evidence. Quotes : In life, there's many things that we have to learn to let go. We have to let go of situations, things, memories, people and even ourselves. -Garcia- How the case is solved : Reid notices that the copycat accidentally dropped a piece of a torn page from a science textbook(it was found underneath the couch of the latest victim's house), and Reid immediately recognizes the handwriting on the torn page. Who did it : (Actually, the unsub used to be a Science lecturer in a college.) The copycat/the new unsub was actually one of his student who was obsessed with his creativity in killing his victims. In the end,the sole-survivor(Kim) went to visit the real unsub who killed her family to ask him a question: Why me?(as in, why didn't you kill me?) And the real unsub just answered : You look just like HER. The ending of this episode actually leaves a question to everyone : Who is the "HER"? |
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| Agent-Jay | My very first. =) | 0 | Dec 23 2011, 1:52 PM EST by Agent-Jay | ||
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Thread started: Dec 23 2011, 1:52 PM EST
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Hey, the story "The Chainsaw Man" is my very first story, I know it's kinda long.. But do try to read it and leave your reply. I really want to know how well is my first story. Thanks guys!
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