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Barbayat
Barbayat
Fanfic Idea - Anyone up to beta/co-write?
Sep 21 2009, 11:23 AM EDT | Post edited: Sep 21 2009, 11:23 AM EDT
Well, I am pretty new here - after watching Season 4 and having more time then after Season 3, I wanted to start with a story idea, that I had for quite some time. It actually involves Hotch being kidnapped (so I seriously hope that does not happen in the premiere *lol* among other reasons ...) and was born out of an old pre-crimnal minds roleplay, where I and three others played "four" serial killers and we figured it would be nice if the team caught them.

That would be a rough summary of what is supposed to happen:
A police officer shows up at the BAU because his own chief does not believe him and he is convinced his wife and his daughter's teacher was killed by the same person who constantly sents him strange items. He is right, the items are trophies from killings and he had a killer duo as his personal fans for years. They always plan some sadistic scheme and cover their tracks very well, but whenever they touch the officer's life it is more spontaneous. (The teacher tried to molest the daugther, the wife cheated ... ) That more unplanned killing helps the BAU find one of the team - unfortunately the duo is a pair of identical twins and one of the the two faked her death years ago - so they get a few things wrong with the profile.
The other sister looks up their mentor - who immediately agrees to help her and kidnaps Hotch in order to exchange the two - they believe this is a good chance to catch him, as they think he is the partner and naturally they want their leader back. But everything goes horribly wrong as they fake the path the caught sister escapes by feeding Garcia a camera shot of the free sister that was taken a while earlier. So both sisters are at large, Hotch ends up with the mentor who is a really sick individual.
The sisters take off on their own, he takes Hotch with him to a hide out. Luckily for Hotch the sick psycho also has a twin sister, and is obsessed with her in all the wrong ways. [...]
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Barbayat
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1. RE: Fanfic Idea - Anyone up to beta/co-write?
Sep 21 2009, 11:35 AM EDT | Post edited: Sep 21 2009, 11:38 AM EDT
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While she is "okay" with him hurting her, he never lets her see what he actually does (except for the time when he killed their father - but she rationalizes this by him deserving it for hurting her). So he realises that he needs to get home with Hotch because he does not want to ruin his "good" relationship with his sister. The important point is, the mentor's inability to truly understand how his sister feels, but Hotch does and although he is probably in the worst situation since the end of Season 4, he knows he has to try and get the sister to help him. So it is kind of a battle of the wits between the mentor who is also highly intelligent but devoid of true emotion and Aaron.
Although naturally the team who realise pretty soon, that they got the profile terribly wrong, still do not know that the other sister is alive and that they probably not going to see their leader again unless a miracle happens. I already know how it is going to end but I think I keep that secret for now ...

Forgot to add: It would be nice if someone who lived in Texas or the South of the United States was interested, someone who just beta-reads would be lovely but even more I would appreciate it if someone willing to work through the scenes with me, giving direct feedback to dialogues and difficult situations would like to work with me on this.
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2. RE: Fanfic Idea - Anyone up to beta/co-write?
Aug 17 2011, 2:33 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 17 2011, 2:33 AM EDT
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While she is "okay" with him hurting her, he never lets her see what he actually does (except for the time when he killed their father - but she rationalizes this by him deserving it for hurting her). So he realises that he needs to get home with Hotch because he does not want to ruin his "good" relationship with his sister. The important point is, the mentor's inability to truly understand how his sister feels, but Hotch does and although he is probably in the worst situation since the end of Season 4, he knows he has to try and get the sister to help him. So it is kind of a battle of the wits between the mentor who is also highly intelligent but devoid of true emotion and Aaron.
Although naturally the team who realise pretty soon, that they got the profile terribly wrong, still do not know that the other sister is alive and that they probably not going to see their leader again unless a miracle happens. I already know how it is going to end but I think I keep that secret for now ...

Forgot to add: It would be nice if someone who lived in Texas or the South of the United States was interested, someone who just beta-reads would be lovely but even more I would appreciate it if someone willing to work through the scenes with me, giving direct feedback to dialogues and difficult situations would like to work with me on this."
hey, i got kinda lost but i live in texas and i would like to help. i actually wrote some fan-fics myself, scroll to the end of the new story ideas tab, and click on "watch me" read the whole story and tell me if you like it
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