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SSAcharlotte
SSAcharlotte
First time story- opinions, help- Please :)
Aug 15 2011, 4:59 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 15 2011, 4:59 PM EDT
This is the first time I've ever written like this. The story is set at the beginning of series 7.
It's slightly too long to fit in the message however there is a link here:
http://textbin.com/31f25

Please can you give me advice, your opinions, what you'd like to see next.
I was going to continue with her explaining how/why Prentiss faked her own death. Do you find this valuable?    
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Wolfeaddict
Wolfeaddict
1. RE: First time story- opinions, help- Please :)
Aug 16 2011, 9:43 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 16 2011, 9:43 AM EDT
Read it and I like it so far! It feels a bit rushed, I might have discribed the situation more (like where the team is in the room so you can get a picture of it in head of the reader), otherwise it's really good, especially for your first fanfic. Looking forward to read more.
Btw if you want to you create a page here to post it. If you need any help with just PM me. :) Do you find this valuable?    

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